Portrait Practice #11 - Shailene Woodley (as Tris Prior) |
One of the key reasons my portrait drawing's proportions tend to be a bit off-kilter is the fact that I'm drawing with my eyes at an angle of roughly 45 degrees to the paper. It would be ideal to have the paper perpendicular to my line of sight, and this is achievable via the use of a mobile drawing board or a table that has multiple viewing angles. Unfortunately, neither are affordable options. But this is an old grip of mine and I probably sound like a broken record. Currently, the only option available to me is to get better at optical indexing (a fancy schmancy way of saying measuring proportions).
A camera shot of my portrait drawing of Tris Prior |
On the bright side, any practice is good for a beginner like me. I'll gladly take any improvements I make regardless how inconsistent they may be. Sometimes I seem to take one step forward and two steps back (e.g. draw the hair well but fumble on the nose and mouth) while on good days I make progress without any regression. What keeps me going is the believe it will all come good eventually. I adhere to the school of taught that says if you are passionate and persistent enough about something then you will get better at it. In other words, artists are taught NOT born, well most of 'em anyway.
Proportion issues meant an accurate likeness was not achieved in this practice piece |
Divergent Book Trilogy Review
My interest in drawing the portrait of Miss Woodley came about after reading the Divergent Trilogy by Veronica Roth. In the first two movie adaptations of the series - Divergent and Insurgent, she portrays the role of Beatrice (Tris) Prior who is the story's main protagonist. As I understand it, the use of First Person Present Tense as the narrative voice in Young Adult novels seems to be all the rage at the moment. But for someone who is used to reading in the traditional (and more widespread) Third Person Past Tense narrative voice, the books took a bit of getting used to. Overall, I felt the book had an interesting dystopian take on an old science fiction theme of [spoiler alert] human genetic engineering. And for what it's worth, I didn't expect the ending in the final book Allegiant.
Divergent trilogy by Veronica Roth |
That being said, I felt that the trilogy started stronger than it ended. I also didn't really buy into the whole romance between the two main characters. Then again, with me being neither a spring chicken nor the intended target demographic, I shouldn't be surprised to feel this way. I would give the trilogy a three-and-a-half out of five stars on account of fairly strong character development as well as a reasonably unique view on a subject matter that has been tackled before by Hugo and Nebula award winning science fiction writers. While not a classic, this series is still worth a read. So go read it!
Hi fem, i don't think that your job is so bad!
ReplyDeleteyour drawing is beautiful and it's very similar to the original!
Thank you for saying so luca. Your encouraging comments are most welcome. ^_^ Initially I was quite happy with my drawing but as I looked at it more and more, I realised that my drawing didn't look like the actress mainly because of two key issues - I drew her face/chin too long and made her eyes too big. That could be more issues but for now I can't spot it.
DeleteFantastic job ! You can be proud ! I wish I could draw like that !
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To be honest, anyone can. It just takes practice and learning from sources that resonate with your own style. My own drawings are far from perfect but way better than when I first started portrait drawing.
DeleteYour not far away F.E.M., I sure once your back in the swing of practice things will come back very quickly. Your also very hard on your self dude, maybe cut yourself some slack. How long has it been since you've practiced regularly?
ReplyDeleteTo my complete surprise it had been 9 months. Time seems to pass faster and faster as I get older. So much I need to do that I should have done when I was younger (even if it's just nine months ^_^). Youth is indeed wasted on the young!
DeleteClearly, you are your own harshest critic. A worthy effort. Keep your chin up.
ReplyDeleteThanks ... and sadly I'm not my own harshest critic. My son took one look at my drawing and basically said it sucked. LoL ... sigh, the honesty of children is refreshing if somewhat a huge blow to one's ego. XD
DeleteI agree, all the comments above are right, you are hard to please! (That's a good thing when it comes to your own work). The portrait is wondeful, I wish I had your skills!
ReplyDeleteRegarding the book, I've watched the two movies so far and I concur with you, it begins nice, but I' not sure where the plot is going to. The wife read the books and enjoyed them more than the movies (but she's avoiding spoilers, so I don't know how this ends!)
You can definitely draw better than me Suber ... I remain convinced that art is learned and how good one gets at it depends on how persistent one is at it.
DeleteInterestingly enough, I enjoyed the movie more than the books so far. The movie and book are sufficiently different from each other to warrant taking a look at both.
It's very close, better than what most others could do. Be proud and keep pushing :)
ReplyDeleteThat I will Zab :) ... I am a stubborn (and miserable) old git who never quits and never seems to know when he is beaten. ;)
DeleteI can't imagine drawing with that level of detail. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteAnd I agree- you're being a bit tough on yourself.
You are too kind Prof and thank you. To be honest, I am still quite far from the level that I want to be, which is achieving near photo realistic portrait drawings. Well, it's only practice number eleven. I guess I will get closer at practice #50.
DeleteWell done Kuan , i love it . Cheers .
ReplyDeleteThank you Vincent. Your drawings are certainly an inspiration!
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